Superior Snap by Saw Lady
Like straphangers on
the New York subway, students
share seats, desks ~ and dreams?
Good one... havent read a haiku in ages.xx
Overcrowding in the classroom is such a huge issue. Hang in there.
I was going to say - is this what you are feeling like at school?
Nice haiku! I left a gift for you on my blog..stop by to pick it up!
Wow, a sad state of affairs, eh? Great haiku - love that it makes a statement! Happy to see you! I will get you on the Hooked on Haiku list yet!Too bad your other readers are haiku chickens... bok bok bok!(that was a challenge, by the way... any takers?) ;)
I would freak out....
truly sad...great haiku!shraddha
This is great...and I wish it wasnt true for you....sending a cocktail your way.
Have you seen that video on YouTube of the people in Japan whose job it is to shove people into the train when it's already full. They literally PUSH people in when it looks like no more will fit. I get claustrophobic just watching the video.
What a great picture! I hope I am never on a subway that crowded. Love your haiku.
I really enjoyed your Haiku, it's a shame it's so crowded for the students - or are they sharing out of choice? At least they have the opportunity to learn even if it's not the perfect situation, that's what's really important.
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